Monday, May 7, 2007

blahhhh.

I don't really like my poem, but people are going to read it soon when we do "Musical Chairs", so I might as well put it on here.


LOVE:
We were on your porch.
The smoke sank into our skin.
Eyes watering,
The moon like fire,
Heating our faces.
Looking into the night,
Dark as ashes,
Ashes from our hearts.
Grieve holding us under,
Mourning from past days.
It all seems so unimaginable,
But yet all so real.
As the sun rises,
And the stars disappear,
We know it’s all the same.
Another day, another hour,
Of being lost and alone,
And being without the one you love.

2 comments:

Technolover said...

Oh, wow! This is really good, are you crazy? It doesn't suck at all. I love it a lot.

blondie said...

ummmm...you like your poem and you know it. :D especially since ms.james was completely touched by it. lol. i love it toooo.
ILY!!!!!