Monday, May 7, 2007

My poem (no pic, sorry dawgs)

On A Leash



The tree trunk feels like the trunk of a petrified elephant.
Their watchful eyes see my toes leave the dirt ground
Adrenaline pumping, I pull myself up
The thrill
I climb higher
My brother’s jealous eyes, my pride
I climb higher
My grandma’s worried eyes
Not high enough
She grabs my foot, trapped
I break free
I climb higher
Her worried voice
Her worried expression
I feel pity
I climb down from the petrified elephant

3 comments:

kdizzle16 said...

your poem is coolio...I used to climb trees

Katiedogg said...

What a clever poem. It even looks like a tree trunk!

blondie said...

i love it!!!!!!!!!!!! :D