Friday, April 27, 2007

poem...




Oho these frozen tears of mine

The run, they intertwine.

Down my pail face.

Along my fingertips .

And tingling down my spine,

Splashing onto the floor.

Hoping no one will,

Break my heart again.

As I bite my cheak,

I fight hard to hold the pain back.

To hear my dark secret

In the stillness of the dark.

My firy passion

Of a lit candle

Burning and writhing in pain.

Again, and again,

Till it turns to dust...

And dissapeares forever more.







p.s. i havent posted in a while... other wise i would never post one of my poems.

and i hate revising and faving people look at them...

its not right.

2 comments:

glamorousnpink said...

Hey i really like your poems and i wish that u would write more. Maybe one day you could be famous for writing or something like that. so i think u should let more people read them maybe thats how u could be discovered. idk ♥

Micaela said...

This poem is very deep...it seems sad, but I still really like it. I can feel all of the emotion going through this persons body. I really enjoyed this poem because I can imagine exactly what this person looks like from all of the descriptions in the poem. Awesome.