It's very windy
and my family gathers together
under the clear sapphire skies.
The hot sand squishes in between my toes
and the water makes us all want to run.
We stand still,
wet up to our knees.
Everyone is hugging.
The rounding of the earth is visible in the horizon
it looks like the end of a CD curve.
The wind is blowing,
chilly, yet warm.
The sun makes up for the cold.
It's like upside down gravity,
the inability to frown.
I hear the fake snapshot from our camera
as my father softly spoke,
"I love you guys."
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I think that it is realy good. It makes me actualy feal like I am standing there and know what you are talking about. Exelent description of all of the senses.
When I wrote this, I seriously had to close my eyes and relive it all.
You should try it. it's a great feeling and it gives great inspiriation.
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